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Story Review of Once upon a Baby Brother

Characters: Lizzie and her mom, and her daddy and Marvin, Miss Pennyroyal

Setting: in the office. 

Plot: Her little brother loved her. But instead of making her bed, he made a mess. Instead of brushing her teeth, he wasted them.

Genre: Fiction


The story of Once upon a baby brother written by Sarah Sullivan talks about a girl named Lizzie and she loved to tell stories. But soon, she got a little brother named Marvin and life began to be hard for Lizzie. She had less time writing her stories and reading them. In class, they always had to write stories. She always had an idea until her little brother left.  Things became easier. But she did not have any ideas. It is because Marvin left. When Marvin came back, Lizzie had lots of ideas for her story. She always got her ideas from Marvin and Marvin was always the monster in her story but when Marvin came back, he was the superhero in the text. 


Some of you might really like writing and some of you don’t like writing. Writing is a very fun activity to learn how to spell words and can help you better understand this language that you are using in your story for some people. In this story, the girl called Lizzie loves to write. She could write anywhere, and even on the benches outside. Even in bed, anywhere. All she needs is a pencil and a piece of paper. A lot of us really like writing stories like Lizzie and some don’t like writing stories. 


All of us will be very creative on something like writing or other stuff. When you are creative in something, that means you are good at it and you can always make it creative. In this story, she is very good at writing all kinds of texts and has the skills of writing. The girl that is called Lizzie really loves to write. She could write anywhere, and even on the benches outside. In the laundry room. That is why she likes it. All of us have creativity on something but you have to find it yourself. 


Everyone should have a favorite passion. Passion means activity like soccer. There are all kinds of activities. We all have a favorite hobby. In the story, Lizzie had a hobby of writing. She is good at it. Having a sport as a hobby is very good for our body health and we will not get sick often. Having a hobby is very important and if you do not have a hobby, then go and find the one that you would like the most. Having a sport as a hobby is very important for all of us. Everyone should have their own special hobby. It could be anything, even violin. 


Some of you might really like writing and some of you don’t like writing. Writing is a very fun activity to learn how to spell words and can help you better understand this language that you are using in your story for some people. All of us will be very creative on something like writing or other stuff. When you are creative in something, that means you are good at it and you can always make it creative. Everyone should have a favorite passion. Passion means activity like soccer. There are all kinds of activities. We all have a favorite hobby.


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